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学姐给你的高考考试语文作文建议

   日期:2023-04-10     来源:www.zhixueshuo.com    作者:智学网    浏览:456    评论:0    
核心提示:对于高中写作,也就是以应试为目的的作文,我的建议只有六个字:多读、多仿、多写。从阅读与写作的关系上来看,念书多的人绝大多数是会写作的人,而一个能写出非常不错的作品的人更不可能不喜欢念书。

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nHelvetica Neue", "PingFang SC", "Hiragino Sans GB", "Microsoft YaHei UI", "Microsoft YaHei", Arial, sans-serif; background-color: rgb; font-size: 16px; line-height: 2em; letter-spacing: 1px;">从阅读与写作的关系上来看,念书多的人绝大多数是会写作的人,而一个能写出非常不错的作品的人更不可能不喜欢念书。这只因在看了足够数目的文化精品后,就算只不过东家模仿一点、西家拼凑一点、再加上一点点我们的领悟与润色,最后拿出来的成品,也足以令很多人拍案叫好。nHelvetica Neue", "PingFang SC", "Hiragino Sans GB", "Microsoft YaHei UI", "Microsoft YaHei", Arial, sans-serif; background-color: rgb; font-size: 16px; line-height: 2em; letter-spacing: 1px;">
nHelvetica Neue", "PingFang SC", "Hiragino Sans GB", "Microsoft YaHei UI", "Microsoft YaHei", Arial, sans-serif; background-color: rgb; font-size: 16px; line-height: 2em; letter-spacing: 1px;">我写作的一个特征是引用多。高中三年级下学期语文老师的女儿为大家班的期中作文写点评,她数了我54分的作文里引例的数目,有接近二十个,有直接引用也有化用。nHelvetica Neue", "PingFang SC", "Hiragino Sans GB", "Microsoft YaHei UI", "Microsoft YaHei", Arial, sans-serif; background-color: rgb; font-size: 16px; line-height: 2em; letter-spacing: 1px;">
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nHelvetica Neue", "PingFang SC", "Hiragino Sans GB", "Microsoft YaHei UI", "Microsoft YaHei", Arial, sans-serif; background-color: rgb; font-size: 16px; line-height: 2em; letter-spacing: 1px;">孰优孰劣,不言而喻。nHelvetica Neue", "PingFang SC", "Hiragino Sans GB", "Microsoft YaHei UI", "Microsoft YaHei", Arial, sans-serif; background-color: rgb; font-size: 16px; line-height: 2em; letter-spacing: 1px;">
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nHelvetica Neue", "PingFang SC", "Hiragino Sans GB", "Microsoft YaHei UI", "Microsoft YaHei", Arial, sans-serif; background-color: rgb; font-size: 16px; line-height: 2em; letter-spacing: 1px;">以前看过我写的东西,大伙看完后会说“这次是模仿XX的吧”,后来,他们的评价渐渐转向了文字本身,直到某天我惊觉已经非常长一段时间无人对我说过我是在模仿某某作家。nHelvetica Neue", "PingFang SC", "Hiragino Sans GB", "Microsoft YaHei UI", "Microsoft YaHei", Arial, sans-serif; background-color: rgb; font-size: 16px; line-height: 2em; letter-spacing: 1px;">
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nHelvetica Neue", "PingFang SC", "Hiragino Sans GB", "Microsoft YaHei UI", "Microsoft YaHei", Arial, sans-serif; background-color: rgb; font-size: 16px; line-height: 2em; letter-spacing: 1px;">到这个时候我就了解,这是我写作的第二个阶段了,我在从模仿走向创作。nHelvetica Neue", "PingFang SC", "Hiragino Sans GB", "Microsoft YaHei UI", "Microsoft YaHei", Arial, sans-serif; background-color: rgb; font-size: 16px; line-height: 2em; letter-spacing: 1px;">
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作文考的归根结底是文学水平而不是议论水平,换言之只须你能体现出你的水平高,实在不必太拘泥于文体与所谓的规范。高考考试前我拿着自己高中三年级下学期的作文看,二十多篇教师打过分的作文中我拿到50分以上的至少有二十篇,其中有一篇满分,还有不少55分、58分。这就是我说的所有最好的证明。

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